A long time ago, way back in our past,
Super-Battle was engaged, and we all had a blast,
There was Captain Invincible, tall, strong and clever,
who went pinch came to shove, never failed to deliver,
versus the genius Lordy, the evil mastermind behind it all,
who had countless hordes of minions to answer his call.
As these titans clashed, others joined in the fray,
looking for glory, or honour, or who just wanted to play.
At the start, we had many and mayhem ensued,
with plotlines all twisted, all tangled and confused,
but with some creative writing, these plots became clearer,
until tragedy stuck with the death of our server.
However once it had started, it had to go on,
there was no chance of stopping, til the fat lady had finished her song,
And so it continued, the Super-Battle II,
with a plotline all shiny and sparkly and new,
While still open to all, there was now an overall plan,
the original two aided by 009 and Sub-Atomic Man.
And wonder of wonders, it actually worked out,
The Super-Battle finished with a bang and a shout,
with plotlines consistent, and some really good posts,
we felt justified indulging in both brags and boasts,
and there we left it, for our paths went different ways,
our writings to be resurected again on some future day.
That day has arrived, the gang's back together,
looking for writing amusing, witty and clever,
The Captain's turned Radical, and moved far away,
A pity, for I needed to test my death laser ray,
009 is nearby in an undisclosed location,
saving his World, before heading off on vacation.
Sub-Atomic Man can now line-dance, a curious skill,
one he picked up, while travelling Texas muttering "Must ... Not ... Kill" ...
And we have a new contender, Da Kings entered the room,
knowing back nitrogylcerin, cos he likes the way it makes his stomach go BOOM!
And so it must end, my very first post -
Thanks, you've been a great crowd, and I've been Lordy your host.
2 comments:
Nice stuff, Mr Lordy, you have something of a knack for these musical numbers.
I would recommend a bit more screening with reading them outloud to yourself - there are a few lines which would work even tighter with a few words cut/rearranged.
Who shall be next to battle?
Yes correct indeed there's a few lines that could be tightened up a fair bit.
That was the first draft you see there, it literally went brain to keyboard. I'll try and edit it a bit over the next few days, I can already see lines which can be improved ...
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